Haage Summane..

I am posting my latest Kannada poem. Let me know if there are any corrections to be done. Give in a shout if you have any; your thoughts are definitely welcome :)

Nanna prati vondu haadigu nalle ninnade prerane..
Ee nalumeya lokadali ninna hrudayave nanage aramane..

Naa ninna neneyalu priye nee nayanadeduru barabaarade..
Nudiyalli nadeyalli nageyalli ellellu bari ninnade kalpane..

Ninna gungali silikiruve.. hora tandu ulisu nannanu..
Hagalirulu prati kshanavu chaluve; nanage ninnade yochane..

Prati usirali hesraagi, prati miditadali nudiyaagi besediruve..
Atmadellede bari tumbihudu; ninagaagi volumeya bhaavane..

Hrudaya tumbi premadali nanage jeeva toreyalu nee korabaarade..
Haatoreyutiruve aa ninna madilalli prana bidalu; haage summane..

Translation and Thought
This poem is basically about a guy trying to tell his lover how-much she means to him..

In the first two lines, he says that she is the inspiration behind all his songs and her heart is a palace for him in this world of love..

Line 3 and 4 : He wonders if she could come infront of his eyes every-time he thinks of her. He says that he remembers her in conversation, smile, stroll and basically everything..

Line 5 and 6 : He says that she is stuck in her thoughts and begs her to come and save him. He says that he worries only about her day and night; every second..

Line 7 and 8 : He says that her name is there in every breath; and she is the sound of every heart-beat.. He goes on to say that his entire soul is filled with feeling of love for her..

Line 9 and 10 : In the final two lines; the guy wonders if she could ask him with love to give his life for her.. He says that he is waiting desperately to die in her arms; just like that..